I like the intense colors! The back is missing some dynamic though, it looks too boring. You should have went for a more lively- look, as you have on the front, which I really like. The developer logo on the front is too far in the corner as well, and on the back, there is no template (it's missing). Not bad, but much room for improvement.
Thank you, I got the inspiration for intense colors from you! I tried a lot of different things for the back, but eventually settled on this, because although it is missing something dynamic, the infected and gloominess represent the darker/scarier side of the game where the front represents the beautiful, but if I think of something to add to the back, I will. As for the logo, that may just be because of the 3D presentation. When you say template, do you mean the legal information at the bottom? Thank you for your critique though, it's appreciated.
Yeah, the big grey boxes just look odd imo, and the infected renders are displaced, especially the one on top, looks a bit as if it's floating.
Yeah, I just looked at the printable, the naughty dog logo is alright there; still, if your presentation makes it look odd, you should work on your presentation.
Yeah, the legal information at the bottom of the back are missing, you should really put those information there, because
a) it makes the box look more professional
b) reduces the space you have to work on
thank you to mark inou and shirazihaa for the resources they provided, which were a great help in making this box.
When I first started this box I wanted it to be extremely colorful, in contrast to the game's official monochrome box art, but as I made this, I started to realize that just as the game has it's vibrant and beautiful moments, the official art was right to reflect the grim, darker moments of the game with the black and white, so I decided to go for a bit of both.
I'm pretty proud of how this turned out but there's always room to improve so I'm open to critique. As always, printable is available.
I like the intense colors! The back is missing some dynamic though, it looks too boring. You should have went for a more lively- look, as you have on the front, which I really like. The developer logo on the front is too far in the corner as well, and on the back, there is no template (it's missing). Not bad, but much room for improvement.
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Thank you, I got the inspiration for intense colors from you! I tried a lot of different things for the back, but eventually settled on this, because although it is missing something dynamic, the infected and gloominess represent the darker/scarier side of the game where the front represents the beautiful, but if I think of something to add to the back, I will. As for the logo, that may just be because of the 3D presentation. When you say template, do you mean the legal information at the bottom? Thank you for your critique though, it's appreciated.
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@abstergoclicker glad I could help x)
Yeah, the big grey boxes just look odd imo, and the infected renders are displaced, especially the one on top, looks a bit as if it's floating.
Yeah, I just looked at the printable, the naughty dog logo is alright there; still, if your presentation makes it look odd, you should work on your presentation.
Yeah, the legal information at the bottom of the back are missing, you should really put those information there, because
a) it makes the box look more professional
b) reduces the space you have to work on
The front looks really good, man. Nice idea.
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thank you to mark inou and shirazihaa for the resources they provided, which were a great help in making this box.
When I first started this box I wanted it to be extremely colorful, in contrast to the game's official monochrome box art, but as I made this, I started to realize that just as the game has it's vibrant and beautiful moments, the official art was right to reflect the grim, darker moments of the game with the black and white, so I decided to go for a bit of both.
I'm pretty proud of how this turned out but there's always room to improve so I'm open to critique. As always, printable is available.
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I do like this, but I also agree with Aldimon. There is some room for improvement
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Not bad, I like the front, but the back comes across as boring to me. I agree with what aldimon said
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