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WATCH DOGS Box Cover Comments
Comment on Hlol Gfx's WATCH DOGS Box Art / Cover.
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Comment on Hlol Gfx's WATCH DOGS Box Art / Cover.
I like it...and that's the only comment I have. I like it. This is really nice. The front would make a killer poster too.
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Interesting concept and idea, front falls a bit degraded and choppy though. I like the different style to the back you've adapted, moreover it feels like it needs more colour.
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This is a little bit too monochromatic, Kind of needs a little bit more color . Besides that this a pretty good cover.
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I like the concept, but the execution could be a lot better. You have some great ideas going on, but the little things take away from making the box really spectacular. The front is very nice. I like the texture and the photo-mashup you created. I like this monochrome palette, but I feel like it the game's logo could be brighter (to go along with the back) and a moved a wee bit higher (maybe just under his waist). I would also move the ubisoft logo a bit so it's no strained against the edge of the box.
On the back, I can literally tell by the text itself that you just copy pasted the text and didn't fix any of the spacing and such. That is really amateurish. I'd go back and write it out properly, grammer and correct leading/spacing. I'd also consider decreasing the size of the font of the summary by 1-2px, so you create more of a textual heirarchy (that way the headline and other text has their own identity). I'd even consider perhaps a different font, perhaps, but this font is alright too.
I think you should also think about refining the little headshot thumbnails by actually making some kind of border around them and I'd even put some kind of solid color behind the names. Maybe that tarnished yellow/gold color?
I think the box has potential to be fantastic, I just think you were swift with trying to execute a complete box without double-checking things. As always, there is also a WIP sub-section in the forums if you wanted more in-depth feedback as you work on these things.
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Book History
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Nice ;)
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Good Idea in Front
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