V1 is the printable slipcover
Printable is the actual cover.
This started out as a God of War I box, but I used the wrong artwork so I converted it to II. Front is inspired by this link and this link
The slipcover was inspired by this: link
I think the back looks a bit too simple. Even though you have quite a lot going on, everything is so blue it creates the illusion of emptiness. A greater variety in colors would really improve this box IMO. Also, there's a typo on the back (God If War).
Other than that, I really do like this box and I feel good about faving.
#10, I wanted that text to stand out just a bit more than the rest, any suggestions on how to do that better?
#9 I wanted the box to have the same color scheme overall, Kratos only has that color because I wanted it to look like some of the clouds from behind him were overlaying him.
V1 is the printable slipcover
Printable is the actual cover.
This started out as a God of War I box, but I used the wrong artwork so I converted it to II. Front is inspired by this link and this link
The slipcover was inspired by this: link
Comments appreciated.
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Amaizing
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Back seems rushed but overall design looks good.
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:O
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#3, Same
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#2, I agree, it's quite wonderphul.
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I came.
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#3, The back wasn't really rushed, I just didn't take the extra time to polish it up. Thanks for the comments guys.
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I think the back looks a bit too simple. Even though you have quite a lot going on, everything is so blue it creates the illusion of emptiness. A greater variety in colors would really improve this box IMO. Also, there's a typo on the back (God If War).
Other than that, I really do like this box and I feel good about faving.
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It looks good, but I am not feeling the maroon color you used on the text.
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#10, I wanted that text to stand out just a bit more than the rest, any suggestions on how to do that better?
#9 I wanted the box to have the same color scheme overall, Kratos only has that color because I wanted it to look like some of the clouds from behind him were overlaying him.
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#11, To me it would look fine with a drop shadow without the border.
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I agree with Throavium regarding the thick maroon stroke around the synopsis, but practically everything else is excellent.
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I've updated the back, tell me what you think.
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The update is great.
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The update is much better. Good work, Pan.
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