well..
I have things that annoying me, but I can tell one thing that disturb me most.
It's the front, like what are the enemies down there doing, are they praising Mario as a god? " Hail Mario, now sacrifice us!"
I'm sorry, but that's what it looks like.
By the way, Don't use Paint. Use instead Photoshop or GIMP
I really dislike this box. The logos on the front are too small, the blue background is boring. The renders are used badly, and i agree with #2 about the enemies in the front. The back is just 4 Screenshots and a 08/15 text.
All in all i would give you 1.6/10
Dear God, please force Drakxxx's hand and finally ban this idiot who clearly doesn't know what he is doing and ignores people when they tell him to put effort and time into his boxes.
Drakxxx, if you tell this guy to post in the WIP one more time, my brain will leak out my nose.
#24 lol, he's joking.
If he did it, he will get a warning. No, you're not the worst author.
I belive that you put hard work on this. But we don't like people who using Paint. You really should use GIMP instead link
Train in this program. If you still use paint then you'll just get bad comments :/ Sorry, but that's the life.
#24 I'm banning you for habitually bumping your box with new comments. Comments that could have been easily edited, as you've been warned before.
When and if you come back, post your designs in a WIP thread in the forums. If you submit another box of this quality to the database, it will be a permanent ban.
#30, Because you're somewhat a beginner, I'm going to give you advice. Unlike some others, I think this did take effort and is good from Paint, but Get GIMP, Paint.net, or, if you can afford it, Photoshop, and find tutorials in Google or something, and do what #26 and #27 said. The renders at least are cut out properly(impressive, Paint can't handle transparency). Now some others aren't saying at least one line of C-C, however some others are. Now, you aren't the best artist, but you aren't the worst, and definetly less ignorant. On to the box-There is no background(well, there is but its boring) and the description on the back isn't well made and has boring text. There are no screen shot borders on the back and the renders are floating on the front. I see that you, I guess, made the template, however only if you are good at it, which(no offense you aren't) don't do it. Get someone to make it or use something from the resources section. Hopefully you'll take my advice.
#32, You registered to this site to submit your art, isn't it?
People want you to make better things, but you won't hear them.
Don't stop making boxes, try getting GiMP or Paint.NET. Learn some tutorials and spend some time doing something like this:
- Finished the box. Is it good? Hm... Better fix this!
- Oh, it's better. Oh I need to fix this!
And so you will be getting better. I know you put effort into your boxes, but spent more time on your boxes.Oh and stop bumping your own boxes.
-The background is plain.
-The characters are too stretched out.
-The spine is terrible
-The back entry is so boring.
-The characters are cut out badly
-The ESRB and the Nintendo logo are both in a little corner
-The back isn't filled out.
my 11th box. i spent 2 hours on this one. i sure put a lot of effort into it!
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well..
I have things that annoying me, but I can tell one thing that disturb me most.
It's the front, like what are the enemies down there doing, are they praising Mario as a god? " Hail Mario, now sacrifice us!"
I'm sorry, but that's what it looks like.
By the way, Don't use Paint. Use instead Photoshop or GIMP
and the point is.. I don't like it
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the enemies are the audience
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#2, well i spent 2 whole hours making it, thank you very much!
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Great work! Can't wait to see what you can do with better tools!
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Sorry, double post.
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I really dislike this box. The logos on the front are too small, the blue background is boring. The renders are used badly, and i agree with #2 about the enemies in the front. The back is just 4 Screenshots and a 08/15 text.
All in all i would give you 1.6/10
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#2 Next time, put on them trollface.
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#4
oh by the way, there's white pixels on Mario and the "AUDIENCE"
*tisk tisk tisk*
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Dear God, please force Drakxxx's hand and finally ban this idiot who clearly doesn't know what he is doing and ignores people when they tell him to put effort and time into his boxes.
Drakxxx, if you tell this guy to post in the WIP one more time, my brain will leak out my nose.
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#5, Thanks!
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#7, well i did the best i could!
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#10, I Did Put Effort into it!!! Didn't you read the first comment???
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Anymore comments?
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#14, shut up and stop bumpin your box.
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#15, Good one.
#13, there is no way in hell that you put effort into this.
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#16, actually i did the best i could alright?? geez
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#17, no you didn't. Read some tutorials and get a better programm. My advice would be Gimp, i think its better than Paint.Net..
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#18 #16
Is it time to put on the trollface?
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*putsontrollface*
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*putsontrollface*
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Thats it, I'm tired of this stupid troll! I'm sending a message to Drakxxx to ban him.
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You butchered Mariolee's great renders and logo.
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#22, no please don't D':
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link
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#24 lol, he's joking.
If he did it, he will get a warning. No, you're not the worst author.
I belive that you put hard work on this. But we don't like people who using Paint. You really should use GIMP instead link
Train in this program. If you still use paint then you'll just get bad comments :/ Sorry, but that's the life.
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#24 I'm banning you for habitually bumping your box with new comments. Comments that could have been easily edited, as you've been warned before.
When and if you come back, post your designs in a WIP thread in the forums. If you submit another box of this quality to the database, it will be a permanent ban.
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#27, ugh, finally.
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#27 Thank you Draxxx :)
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#29, well you guys are the lazy ones for not giving me a tutorial!!!
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#30, Because you're somewhat a beginner, I'm going to give you advice. Unlike some others, I think this did take effort and is good from Paint, but Get GIMP, Paint.net, or, if you can afford it, Photoshop, and find tutorials in Google or something, and do what #26 and #27 said. The renders at least are cut out properly(impressive, Paint can't handle transparency). Now some others aren't saying at least one line of C-C, however some others are. Now, you aren't the best artist, but you aren't the worst, and definetly less ignorant. On to the box-There is no background(well, there is but its boring) and the description on the back isn't well made and has boring text. There are no screen shot borders on the back and the renders are floating on the front. I see that you, I guess, made the template, however only if you are good at it, which(no offense you aren't) don't do it. Get someone to make it or use something from the resources section. Hopefully you'll take my advice.
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how about this? i stop making boxes and just comment on other peoples boxes! that's what i'll do.
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#32, You registered to this site to submit your art, isn't it?
People want you to make better things, but you won't hear them.
Don't stop making boxes, try getting GiMP or Paint.NET. Learn some tutorials and spend some time doing something like this:
- Finished the box. Is it good? Hm... Better fix this!
- Oh, it's better. Oh I need to fix this!
And so you will be getting better. I know you put effort into your boxes, but spent more time on your boxes.Oh and stop bumping your own boxes.
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#33, well i tried paint.net and i couldnt get the gray backround off the character so i could put it on the box!
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This took you 2 hours? More like 2 minutes.
-The background is plain.
-The characters are too stretched out.
-The spine is terrible
-The back entry is so boring.
-The characters are cut out badly
-The ESRB and the Nintendo logo are both in a little corner
-The back isn't filled out.
0.5/10
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