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Super Smash Bros. Fray Box Cover Comments
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I like this one, and I hope you do too. Faves are good, author fave if you want more!
Thanks to Mercut 1999 for the logo and Koopadasher for the renders.
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I was trying to post in your WIP thread, but alas, I was to late.
You uploaded it while I was typing.
It's a nice attempt, but this could use a lot of work.
The renders are all over the place, and in different sizes which make it look weird. (Magikoopa and Blopper are bigger than Bowser for instance.) It would have also helped to spice up the renders themselves with either glows, shadows or art effects. As it is now, it just looks like renders place on a grid. The grid itself in general isn't working so well either I don't think.
The logo is of good quality, but the "Fray" part is to disconnected from the "Smash Bros." part. it looks funny.
What happened to the text on the spine?
I like the Andross on the back, spitting the screenshots, but the screenshots themselves are so small, I didn't even think you included any when I first looked at it.
All in all I can tell some effort went into this, and it's on it's way to becoming something. If you gave it a little more time in the WIP thread, you might have gotten some more helpful critiques to polish the design out more. Something to keep in mind for the future.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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^ Yeah, that :)
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I love how you did the screenshots. Drakxxx basically said everything.
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I didn't make that logo, del337er did, but thanks for crediting anyway, and thanks for stealing my idea when we were doing a collab and say "Im going to do this solo"
Edited at 1 decade ago
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