The story is actually a cool idea, I don't support a notion like the one about 2012, but I do think a end of the world setting with the blackarms taking over would be kinda cool.
While I like you idea, the box could have been done better.
The text on the back is really bland. I'd try something different. maybe something like this:
The Black Arms have reached into our world and gripped us with fear.
And worst of all, you've got to stop them.
But not by yourself.
Join Shadow, the mysterious black hedgehog, Sonic and friends on a journey to save the human race. Zoom through chaotic streets, destroy Black Arms' minions, and save humanity in a stunning, action-packed sequel to the hit game [italicized] Shadow the Hedgehog [end ital.]
What do you think of that?
Oh, and get bloodspatter brushes. The do MUCH better than photobucket renders. ^o^
The front is really cool looking! But you should sized the sega logo down a bit.
Other then the super-sized sega logo the front is gold!
As for the back, there are a quite a bit of flaws... first, the screen shots seem.... bunched up..... spread them out a little and add some screenshot boarders.
Seconed, the esrb on the front says "E 10+" when the back says "E for everyone" fix that and you will have a really good box here!
#5, the game should also be "T" rated, because I do believe Shadow swore in the first one. The game also deals with guns, which is not really "E10+" material- let alone "E".
#6, I'm glad to help. I'll check in on you periodically to see how you're coming, and give you some advice.
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The story is actually a cool idea, I don't support a notion like the one about 2012, but I do think a end of the world setting with the blackarms taking over would be kinda cool.
While I like you idea, the box could have been done better.
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The text on the back is really bland. I'd try something different. maybe something like this:
The Black Arms have reached into our world and gripped us with fear.
And worst of all, you've got to stop them.
But not by yourself.
Join Shadow, the mysterious black hedgehog, Sonic and friends on a journey to save the human race. Zoom through chaotic streets, destroy Black Arms' minions, and save humanity in a stunning, action-packed sequel to the hit game [italicized] Shadow the Hedgehog [end ital.]
What do you think of that?
Oh, and get bloodspatter brushes. The do MUCH better than photobucket renders. ^o^
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#3, agree with you!
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The front is really cool looking! But you should sized the sega logo down a bit.
Other then the super-sized sega logo the front is gold!
As for the back, there are a quite a bit of flaws... first, the screen shots seem.... bunched up..... spread them out a little and add some screenshot boarders.
Seconed, the esrb on the front says "E 10+" when the back says "E for everyone" fix that and you will have a really good box here!
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#3, i should do that:)
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#5, the game should also be "T" rated, because I do believe Shadow swore in the first one. The game also deals with guns, which is not really "E10+" material- let alone "E".
#6, I'm glad to help. I'll check in on you periodically to see how you're coming, and give you some advice.
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This is really good, but I think the 2012 thing is unessesary
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