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ok, another simple box.
please comment what could be better, and if i should add a back or not.
logo, basball bat and baseball field were made by myself.
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Well, that's pretty nice. It's a little plain, but with some esrb and dev logos it should be your best yet, 3/5.
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damn, forgot the logo's XD
sorry, my fault.
i'll do them as fast as i can.
and it's meant to be plain, after all, its paper mario, so nice 3d effects can't do =P
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#3, very understandable.
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Pretty nice idea actually :p I dont like how it is executed...the background doesnt really work. Maybe add these hills (link) instead of the red and blue? Also, i would suggest putting a ball coming at Mario in lower center screen. 3/5 overall.
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#4, thnx for the hills, just what i was looking for =D
and erm... i'll try searching for a baseball in paper mario style, i don't think i can make that myself... XD
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ok, here's V2, added the nintendo logo and pegi rating.
next update will be with the hills as background.
i had to add the back, otherwise vgba wouldn't update my box...
plz comment, maybe even fav? ^^
by the way, this box was supposed to be a contest box against ghoul56's version of super smash bros. - the missing numbers, we put up a little friendly competition, so you guys decide which you like best =P
Edited at 1 decade ago
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I dont like the style of the floor and background. Try making it more, Mario?
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#6, I might be able to help you with the ball =D. But i dont think you should post "back coming soon". Just post a comment next time ;)
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#8, if you would, i could use some help with that ball =D
ghehe, didn't know what to write on the back =P
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#9, By saying i dont think you should say "back coming soon" i meant dont post an empty back of a template. :p Anyways, here's your ball image (link) Tell me if you like it.
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yeah, it's awesome! thanks a lot =D
i just had to add a empty back, because vgba wouldn't update my box if i didn't have a back...
and i didn't have anything to put on the back... XD
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ok, V3 added. i added the hills and baseball i got from sonic the hedgehog. thnx again man =D
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Nice box actually :)
There's only a few things that need changing before I fav...
The ball needs position above the bat in my opinion.
I don't like the style of the seats and you could maybe give mario a speedy effect :D
I might fav if that is changed ;)
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Sorry to keep bumping here but i thought you were going to put the ball coming at mario...:p it looks a bit random on the ground there. xD i would suggest making it a bit bigger and half off screen. I'll stop posting now. >_>
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ghehe, thanks for the tip sonic.
i don't mind you keep bumping here, because you are helping me better my box ;)
Edited at 1 decade ago
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v4 added!
see for yourself if you can find the changes ;)
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I like the front much better now!
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thanks :)
any ideas for the back?
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#17, a couple of "paper" renders, a tagline, a description, and a couple of screenshots.
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Much better, I'll fav now ( keeping the promise ;) )
For the back... hmmm... maybe you can put the screenshots in holes in the paper... I don't know how to say it... Holes made by flying baseballs in the paper of the back xD yeah, it's like that... kinda xP
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V5 added! maybe the last update, i did my best to use all of the tips.
i also added some grass at the feet of the hills on the front, to make it look more realistic. i would say:
BLEH-HEH-HEH-HEH BLECK! ^^
plz comment again.
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There's no screenshots... But the back is ok.
The discription is good but it may be a good idea to add those screenshots for a last update.
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the luigi is a screenshot, my dear friend... =P
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does anybody have any kind of comment? :)
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mario13 thnx for the fav :)
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