Another Persona 4 boxart. This one actually started out as a remake of my previous one (to fix some things and make it look better) but when I was finished with the front it hardly resembled the original other than the character and the back just didn't match at all so I made a completely new one (well, almoast completely new).
I hope that you like this as much as my last one and as always feel free to comment cause I am always looking for feedback (of both kinds).
Credits for the template once again goes to Crayon Man.
-boxgasms- [that's right, i made a new word just for this box =D]
anyways, 0_0 love it =D d(^.^d)
EDIT: not that big of an issue, but on the back, the big character is a bit choppy, pixely i guess i could put it, again not really that big of an issue =D still love the box ;D
Hmm, it was already mentioned about the back font, so I'll lay off that.
Some comments/crits:
LOVE the bullets for the game features on the back.
I'm not really a fan of how the text on the headline/tagline on the back seems to be highlighted.
The front looks great, though I'd probably take the "7.10" off the character's face, unless that has something to do with the story I don't know about (I thought it was the release date in Japan...).
Other than that, I love the color scheme, it all fits together well. Images/Screens on the back are pretty sweet.
Looks great! Love the green color scheme here. A bit bothered by the numbers on the MC's face and the back synopsis is bunched to the right too much, but overall...nice work!
This is hopefully the final version so I hope that you like it. I took all the critique into consideration and this is how it ended up like, I forgot to remove the "7.10" of the characters face but maybe they do have some significance to the story so I hope you aren't too bothered by them.
Another Persona 4 boxart. This one actually started out as a remake of my previous one (to fix some things and make it look better) but when I was finished with the front it hardly resembled the original other than the character and the back just didn't match at all so I made a completely new one (well, almoast completely new).
I hope that you like this as much as my last one and as always feel free to comment cause I am always looking for feedback (of both kinds).
Credits for the template once again goes to Crayon Man.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Thats Awsome. great work there! looks really sleek and clean.
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Agreed.
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-boxgasms- [that's right, i made a new word just for this box =D]
anyways, 0_0 love it =D d(^.^d)
EDIT: not that big of an issue, but on the back, the big character is a bit choppy, pixely i guess i could put it, again not really that big of an issue =D still love the box ;D
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#4, Yeah I noticed that too and it was one of the things I fixed in the update.
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#5, 0_0 -boxgasms somemore- =D love it! :)
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My only problem. That back font.
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#7, You mean the synopsis? What bothers you about the font?
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Fantastic design. I love how you set the screenshots up on the back.
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#8, I find it hard to read. Try changing it to something a little simpler
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#10, I will put it on my to do list then for the next update. I just want to get more feedback before I do so.
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Not bad :)
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Hmm, it was already mentioned about the back font, so I'll lay off that.
Some comments/crits:
LOVE the bullets for the game features on the back.
I'm not really a fan of how the text on the headline/tagline on the back seems to be highlighted.
The front looks great, though I'd probably take the "7.10" off the character's face, unless that has something to do with the story I don't know about (I thought it was the release date in Japan...).
Other than that, I love the color scheme, it all fits together well. Images/Screens on the back are pretty sweet.
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Looks great! Love the green color scheme here. A bit bothered by the numbers on the MC's face and the back synopsis is bunched to the right too much, but overall...nice work!
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This is hopefully the final version so I hope that you like it. I took all the critique into consideration and this is how it ended up like, I forgot to remove the "7.10" of the characters face but maybe they do have some significance to the story so I hope you aren't too bothered by them.
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#15, Actually, the 7.10 on the M.C.'s face just refers to the date that the game came out in Japan (July 10th)
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I just calculated and this has 153 points! Why isn't it HoF?
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I just calculated and this has 153 points! Why isn't it HoF?
EDIT: Ooops, Double Post.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Final update!
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