Woot, I finished. Please don't go off on me like on the Orange Box, kthx.
Oh yeah, this is for the final round of Spring Break Brawl comp. Will post link soon.
#1, Listen...if people don't like your box, they don't like it. You're no God, don't expect people to worship everything you turn out. As for this box, it's pretty nice, I remember you said you'd change Brazil to Japan,but meh. IMO, it;s too minimalistic, more renders would be nice. The text overlapping the Torterra looks weird. 3/5
You used VGMasters screenshots. :O
Looks pretty well made, I would have prefered if charizard's tailw as under the spine.
Also the online warning under the ESRB doesn't usually look like that I think.
#4, I know I'm not a God, so why bother attempting an insult? I know it's not my best, but I'd appreciate if one person could actually look at the box and not the fecking PRESENTATION, then we could get somewhere. But people are bitching up a storm, and nobody on this site actually appreciates minimalism. No, I'm not saying love my box. I'm taking this opportunity to say that about 95% of people on this site love people who stuff their boxes to oblivion. And how the hell is THIS minimalism? <_< That said,
#5+6, just trying to spice it up a little ;)
#7, O.o The font I used on the back is the official one they used for the 3D rpg's. I didn't really know a better font that was not too fancy and not too plain, and this one seemed to work fine. About the nunchuck: good point :P
#11, Thanks, critique is something kinda hard from me. This isn't an "Oh, woe is me, feel sorry for me post," but I mean when you're bambarded with all of these comments it's kinda discouraging. Then when you start to re-build the box is the hard part ;)
#12, thanks but it's true. Look at my page and try to tell me that more than half of my boxes are above par. If you do, say which ones <_< :P
#13, I pm'd him about it, and edited my first post.
#19, recently, I've noticed that you've been super critical of boxes IMO. On most, not all, boxes you've only seen to state what's bad an not what's great. That might just be what I've seen. And, yes, I do know you've done that on some. I told HUNTER the same thing when he was new (obviously you aren't new, but whatever). I hope this doesn't spark a fight or a dislike for me. I just wanted to let you know what I've noticed. That's why I said to chill out, not just because of this one little thing, but of everyhitng. Sometimes, it's just better to say, "Looks pretty good." Over listing all of the problems. Of course, if they ask why, then obviously it's okay to list it. Or if a box is really bad, you can do it then too. Lol. And don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to tell you what to do (even tho it's what it sounds like, I'm not). Hope you don't take this too personal and hate me for the rest of your life. Cheers!
As this was a while ago, I'm not gonna complete crit, plus other people have given you plenty. It's a well-handled box for a cool idea, one friends and I have pined about in the past (except one friend wanted it where everybody rolled different Pokemon, heh.)
Woot, I finished. Please don't go off on me like on the Orange Box, kthx.
Oh yeah, this is for the final round of Spring Break Brawl comp. Will post link soon.
Credit to VGM for the screenshots ;)
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I dont like the text on the back, and I really dont like charizards tail on the spine.
EDIT: And I dont like the round shadows.
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Awesome job, man.
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#1, Listen...if people don't like your box, they don't like it. You're no God, don't expect people to worship everything you turn out. As for this box, it's pretty nice, I remember you said you'd change Brazil to Japan,but meh. IMO, it;s too minimalistic, more renders would be nice. The text overlapping the Torterra looks weird. 3/5
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You used VGMasters screenshots. :O
Looks pretty well made, I would have prefered if charizard's tailw as under the spine.
Also the online warning under the ESRB doesn't usually look like that I think.
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looks great other then charizards tail. cut it off or move him over.
edit: oh and the wii mote needs a number
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I actually like it.... the concept is nice although there are some things I dont like about it:
- The Charizard tail on the spine looks silly
- America I can understand but Brazil seems too random? Is Pokémon even big over there?
- The Pikachu on the top looks stupid
- The font used on the back is boring
- You could of re-worded the back description better
- No nun-chuck logo on back? I'd imagine a game like this would use the nun-chuck to move?
- You didnt credit VGMaster for the screenshots?
Hope its not sounding too harsh because overall, its pretty nice! The flaws just stop it becoming anything special 3/5
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#4, I know I'm not a God, so why bother attempting an insult? I know it's not my best, but I'd appreciate if one person could actually look at the box and not the fecking PRESENTATION, then we could get somewhere. But people are bitching up a storm, and nobody on this site actually appreciates minimalism. No, I'm not saying love my box. I'm taking this opportunity to say that about 95% of people on this site love people who stuff their boxes to oblivion. And how the hell is THIS minimalism? <_< That said,
#5+6, just trying to spice it up a little ;)
#7, O.o The font I used on the back is the official one they used for the 3D rpg's. I didn't really know a better font that was not too fancy and not too plain, and this one seemed to work fine. About the nunchuck: good point :P
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#8, theres a diference between minimalistic and boring...
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#9, Ok, I guess it's boring. I don't really give one because half of my boxes are bad. I guess that's just another. *shrug*
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#10 In my opinion, this ain't boring... far from it!
In fact, this actually has alot of potential.
Im sure if you fixed up the flaws everyone has mentioned above and maybe add some more Pokémon to the front, this could be really nice. ;)
#12 Seriously, put SOME effort into your spelling -.-
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#10, dont be so under coffident it might not be the greatest but it looks fun and im sure it inspires people to make ssomething simmiler.
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Looks great, but it kinda bothers me that you used VGMaster's screenshots. >_>
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#11, Thanks, critique is something kinda hard from me. This isn't an "Oh, woe is me, feel sorry for me post," but I mean when you're bambarded with all of these comments it's kinda discouraging. Then when you start to re-build the box is the hard part ;)
#12, thanks but it's true. Look at my page and try to tell me that more than half of my boxes are above par. If you do, say which ones <_< :P
#13, I pm'd him about it, and edited my first post.
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Yay! You poted it =D
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EDIT: Whoops, don't look at full view :P
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I don't understand why you made all of South America the Brazil flag? It makes sense for America but not South America.
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#13, he asked me, I gave him permission. Chill out.
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#18, what do you mean chill out? I didn't get mad, I was just saying that he should've made his own. >_>
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#19, recently, I've noticed that you've been super critical of boxes IMO. On most, not all, boxes you've only seen to state what's bad an not what's great. That might just be what I've seen. And, yes, I do know you've done that on some. I told HUNTER the same thing when he was new (obviously you aren't new, but whatever). I hope this doesn't spark a fight or a dislike for me. I just wanted to let you know what I've noticed. That's why I said to chill out, not just because of this one little thing, but of everyhitng. Sometimes, it's just better to say, "Looks pretty good." Over listing all of the problems. Of course, if they ask why, then obviously it's okay to list it. Or if a box is really bad, you can do it then too. Lol. And don't get me wrong, I'm not trying to tell you what to do (even tho it's what it sounds like, I'm not). Hope you don't take this too personal and hate me for the rest of your life. Cheers!
EDIT: Gosh, I typed a lot! Lol.
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#20, I hate you now. Let's fight.
But seriously, I point out the flaws so that they know what to fix. If I said that a box is perfect, and it isn't, then the problems will remain.
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Erm, O.o
@Trev, it's because I'm a lazy bastard and Wikipedia had an svg of Brazil :P
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looks good, good luck to you
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#23, Thanks, you too
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nice job on the cover! the back was good as well!
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Nice idea, i am sure the nitendo logo is supose to remind the user that it needs wifi... id remove the text at the bottom... Great box though..
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As this was a while ago, I'm not gonna complete crit, plus other people have given you plenty. It's a well-handled box for a cool idea, one friends and I have pined about in the past (except one friend wanted it where everybody rolled different Pokemon, heh.)
I definitely fav it, awesome work.
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#27, Thanks man =]
My other stuff is better though, IMO
But hey, if you like it =]
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this will be in the HOF soon
5/5 +fav
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